[Zack shows up on camera and he has a bruise on his face, a fat lip, and a cut on his forehead. He moves his shoulder and winces. If one looks closely, they can see his shoulder bandaged up in bloody bandages.
[the L337 Pod is at an odd angle, and on the ground. There are leaves in the view, and it's obvious that it is in the forest. Steps can be heard and two figures can be seen running towards each other. One lifts the other into the air and spins around.
The male figure puts the other down but his arms stay around her. Holding her in a close embrace. Words can be heard but they're all muffled and unclear.]
"I missed you."
"I love you."
[They're the only words that can be heard before the feed cuts off]
I just realized that I haven't done this for my new journals! :O
So Critiques plz? :) Honestly, I desperately NEED it! Don't fear the mod!s I want Crit and I want it BAAAAAD. (because nobody gives it b'aaaaaaaaw :( )
[The LP Shows Zack sitting on his couch, obviously bored. He shifts to the side and frowns. His fingers drum on the armrest for a bit before he shifts again.
Suddenly, there's a loud growl that seems to have come from his stomach.]
Man, I'm hungry...
[the 1337Pod is picked up and only Zack's crotch lap is shown for a few seconds as buttons are being pressed.
A sigh, and then the 1337Pod is put down again, showing Zack once more]
No Gil... I wish I had some fries... [and lo and behold a large order of fries, greasy and hot from the fryer appear on the small coffee table. Zack stares at them for a second and looks around.]